Friday, November 21, 2008

this is the one i showed at the last critique. it's now in its final stages. feedback would be much appreciated.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

the color just looks washed on at this point and i think it would help if u concentraited the color in a few areas

Laura said...

I like were your going with these. They look much more like work that you would be interested in doing and talking about. The color doesn't bother me, but one thing I notice is that the line work of your drawings is not as tight as in your etchings. Maybe you should draw with a sharper instrument.