here's an altered version with a little more "depth." i've gone ahead and applied a crop as well. i think it's getting closer to being done for real.
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3 comments:
woot!
definite improvement...
i'd like to see some contrast maybe? add a little more dynamism?
The spacing around the edges seems to be bothering me. It only goes off the edge on one side, which is drawing me over there. Could you extend a shape on the other side to add weight or bring one of the objects to the edge? Experiment a little more with how your edge spacing is set up.
-Jessica
Or perhaps bring some of the warmer colors up into the sequence of shapes to draw my eye with color. Because right now with the shape going off the edge, it happens to be the largest brightest shape, so by dispering the color it may help as well.
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